Okay, first of, I'm not the writer of this story, the real writter is
This is the first chapter of a story based on one of my Dark Alternative ideas:
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And for my opinion he/she did a great job on this first chapter. And I really hope he/she will really work on chapter 2.

So please read it!!!! And tell me what youre thinking.

Chapter 2 Highlights:
Awkward undressing pony moment.
Ken watches the show, is he really that different
from the store clients?
Unicorns can use magic?! Could this be the reason why Twilight Sparkle
lost her memory?